Ebay II

[Ch3tan]

brand new psp

Your starting bid is too high, probably wont get any bids.

 

[tris-]

what price would you suggest? bearing in mind i dont want to take any risks of a mjor loss :/

 

[Ch3tan]

Well if your not willing to risk a loss, ebya probably isnt the best place to sell.

I'd say change your listing to be more specific, I looked at it and thought " FUCK off, £280 for a psp giga pack? Ripp off". You need to mention thats its a psps plus x amount of games in the title, add a picture of everything you are selling, and a picture in the listings page. Then set the price to make it a bargain -or state how much it all cost you new.

 

[Lazarus]

or set a reserve

 

[GDW]

All of the above comments plus:

Write in proper english that makes sense e.g you say "i seen few or no dead pixels" - you either did or you didn't...its pretty important

You only have one feedback rating so very few people will see you as a trustworthy seller especially when you are are starting with such a high price

 

[tris-]

thanks for the tips.

ive revised my item, can anyone take a look and tell me what they think?

 

[Lazarus]

thanks for the tips.

Reason for selling: Rrevious one broke in an accident. Recieved this as replacement. It is brandnew and from the little time i spent on this console (about 20 minutes) I seen VERY few dead pixels (around 3).
In store, this pack would cost £300+.

Reason for selling: Previous one broken in an accident. Received this as replacement. It is brandnew and from the little time i spent on this console (about 20 minutes) I saw VERY few dead pixels (approx 3).

In store, this pack would cost £300+.



you might also want to point out where on the screen these dead pixels appear

 

[GDW]

Yep its still full of typos and grammatical errors. To be honest it looks like you havent put much thought into promoting it.

 

[tris-]

sorry but i cant see the typos. ive ran it through spell checkers and it comes back clean :/

 

[GDW]

sorry but i cant see the typos. ive ran it through spell checkers and it comes back clean :/

Buy a new spell checker mate

 

[tris-]

ive ran it through ebays spell checker. ive now used MS words spell checker. it found two mistakes but no gramatical errors

 

[Calaen]

I cant see any typos either you could just point it out to him and hlep him

 

[Yaka]

http://www.spellcheck.net/ is usefull


but to be hoonest if you check my auctions most of which are done around 3am
are preety muich loaded with yaka codE

 

[MYstIC G]

http://www.spellcheck.net/ is usefull


but to be hoonest if you check my auctions most of which are done around 3am
are preety muich loaded with yaka codE

What? like your sig atm?

 

[Yaka]

thats not yakacode f00! just me thinking we could have banners as sigs like in some other forums

 

[Yaka]

Fight night round 3 for x360

http://cgi.ebay.co.uk/Fight-Night-r...yZ112847QQssPageNameZWDVWQQrdZ1QQcmdZViewItem

an graw for x360

http://cgi.ebay.co.uk/Ghost-Recon-A...yZ112847QQssPageNameZWDVWQQrdZ1QQcmdZViewItem

 

[Clown]

I won the auction I was helping boost the price for

 

[Yaka]

carzy f00!!!

 

[MYstIC G]

thats not yakacode f00! just me thinking we could have banners as sigs like in some other forums

I know its not... IT MADE SENSE!!!!!

 

[Ch3tan]

Tris, I applaud your honesty, but £280 for a psp with 3 dead pixels? Naaaaa.

 

[tris-]

find me a shop you could enter randomly and buy a PSP with LESS than 3 dead pixels, i will give you a blow job if you do.

i should probably re check where and how they are. havent used it for about 3 months.

i do remember though, they only showed up under certain colours. thanks for the covert tip though

 

[GDW]

I cant see any typos either you could just point it out to him and hlep him

Thats because he has corrected them. I have helped him. I told him that it was full of grammatical errors and typos which he has fixed. Its still very badly written and I will be shocked if he gets the reserve price.

For example (note Calaen this further assistance) he says, and I quote:

"Reason for selling: Previous one broke in an accident. This system was received as a replacement."

Sentence stucture is poor and most of all, he never states the reason why he is selling it. The previous one was broken in an accident and because you received a replacement you have decided to sell it......come on please that isnt a proper reason.

I wish you the best of luck though Tris. If you sell it you should spend the money on a basic English writing course.

 

[Yaka]

http://www.theregister.co.uk/2006/05/26/ebay_email_trauma/

sure hope that never ever happens to me

 

[tris-]

I wish you the best of luck though Tris. If you sell it you should spend the money on a basic English writing course.

lol

 

[JingleBells]

http://cgi.ebay.com/ebaymotors/ws/eBayISAPI.dll?ViewItem&item=4644351427

 

[Yaka]

god damn ive sold pcs on ebay before but some of the emails im getting are from peeps that need to find a brain from somewhere. stupid questions range from peeps wanting last nights cricket higlights recorded, how big the monitor is (wot monitor?) did i pshop the pic so the tower looks that small and my favorite well i do a trade with mini metro .

 

[Ch3tan]

and thats without me having asked a question yet!

 

[Lazarus]

http://cgi.ebay.com/ebaymotors/ws/eBayISAPI.dll?ViewItem&item=4644351427

This Listing Is Unavailable


This listing (#4644351427) has been removed or is no longer available. Please make sure you entered the right item number.

If the listing was removed by eBay, consider it canceled. Note: Listings that have ended more than 90 days ago will no longer appear on eBay.

Try searching for another item now.

 

[Yaka]

trust me to list an item at 3am, and which ends at 3am some f00 from china has
won the auction with 0 feedback:/

 

[Yaka]

ok need help i mistakenly click the "item sent" button and now the item is marked as sent, any ideas why to have it un sent?