Sissyfoo
Fledgling Freddie
- Joined
- Dec 22, 2003
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Do things work differently in southampton? Usually a gold star is given out as recognition for works of excellence, such as your little opus. I am being totally sincere! It really is a well written piece of literature.
I especially loved the imagery of "Turbulent times bring only waves and curants...". It conjured up images of rough seas of berries and raisins, upon which floated a life boat, the sole occupant being a ginger haired boy doing his best to keep the tears from flooding out as he grips the edge of the boat in fear. Beautiful.
Really, a truly magnificent work of art.
I especially loved the imagery of "Turbulent times bring only waves and curants...". It conjured up images of rough seas of berries and raisins, upon which floated a life boat, the sole occupant being a ginger haired boy doing his best to keep the tears from flooding out as he grips the edge of the boat in fear. Beautiful.
Really, a truly magnificent work of art.