Tragedy(Please READ!)

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old.bobblegamer

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I made a poem for all those who died on Sept.11,2001.

I don't have words to ease the pain,
Only hope that they didn't die in vain.
So many women, so many men,
So many little children, who'll never smile again.

So many fireman, so many E.M.T.'s,
So many cops who can't again hug their families.
They all showed such bravery, and couldn't have known,
That in trying to save lives, it would cost them their own.

So many passengers, only taking a flight,
The day began like any other day in their lives.
But cowards took over, with pure evil intertwined,
It turned out to be their last day, the end of their time.

How can this happen to all those innocent beings?
How can others take lives as if it has no meaning?
How can we deal with what we now know to be true?
How do we stop this from happening again...to me or maybe you?

Punishment must be swift, and severe to the fullest,
American lives are valuable and terrorists must know this.
We will not stand for this in our nation,
We do not handle things, with such barbaric condemnation.

This cannot go unpunished, of this there's no doubt,
Rid the Earth of these demons and let God sort them out.
Needlessly we've lost thousands of American lives!
Dare we the people demand, and eye for an eye?

As you deal with your shock, pain, and grief,
Resentment, sadness, fear and disbelief,
Don't let them die in vain, don't allow them forgotten,
Pray to your God we find and punish Osama bin Laden.

Amen

With a heavy heart, and every ounce of thought, I dedicate this to the lost lives of people on 4 highjacked planes, The World Trade Center, and the Pentagon who died 9/11/01, as well as their families and loved ones. May God be with you, and heal your pain, as swiftly if not moreso then punishment for this heinous crime, is delivered.
-Jack
 
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old.bobblegamer

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SICK!

U R SICK IF YOU FUCKIN THINK I'M SPAMMIN!U CALL THIS RUBBISH!HOW WOULD YOU FEEL IF YOU WERE IN THE TRAGEDY!?HUH?!AT LEAST I TOOK TIME TO WRITE SOMETHING GOOD YOU LITTLE FRICKIN GNOME!

Excuse me..God.
 
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old.bobblegamer

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FREAK!

U r a Friggin Yellow Toothed Skittle!:upyours:
 
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old.bobblegamer

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PIC Of Embattle!

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HAHA!That is Embattle!
 
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Embattle

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You seem to be laughing alone but don't worry your dad will not be wrapped in that box next year.
 
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bodhi

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Re: SICK!

Originally posted by bobblegamer
HOW WOULD YOU FEEL IF YOU WERE IN THE TRAGEDY!?.

I hate to point this out (well I dont really) but if he was in the tragedy he wouldn't feel an awful lot. As he would be dead.

Now run along boy, the sunshine bus is leaving.
 
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old.bobblegamer

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Oh.So scary.Too bad she didn't turn around so you could notice its your MOM!

P.S.Let's stop the joking.Ok? (Bodhi,I'm talking to Embattle.)
 
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Embattle

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Re: Re: SICK!

Originally posted by Bodhi
Now run along boy, the sunshine bus is leaving.

Ding Ding....all aboard....that includes you bobblegamer.
 
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Ono

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Bobblegame


As someone who is reasonably impartial on all this, my advice to you would be to quit now.


You are NOT going to win a flame war against some of the most experienced Flamers on BW Forums.


Let bygones be bygones and don't post any more of those dumb threads.




I fear for the psychological damage it could do to your young childlike mind.



Serious mate. Heed my friendly warning.
 
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old.bobblegamer

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Most Experienced Flamers?Shoot...let's drop it.
 
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Ono

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Re: Ono

Originally posted by bobblegamer
I don't have a childlike mind!Ok?



Fair enough.

Then let's call it a day shall we?





Originally posted by Embattle
Nice avatar Ono.

Cheers matey. Not too different from my old one. Just a freshen up of it.:)
 
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man like tong

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Originally posted by Ono
Bobblegame

You are NOT going to win a flame war against some of the most experienced Flamers on BW Forums.



Pfft
 
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old.ignus

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Re: SICK!

Originally posted by bobblegamer
U R SICK IF YOU FUCKIN THINK I'M SPAMMIN!U CALL THIS RUBBISH!HOW WOULD YOU FEEL IF YOU WERE IN THE TRAGEDY!?HUH?!AT LEAST I TOOK TIME TO WRITE SOMETHING GOOD YOU LITTLE FRICKIN GNOME!

Excuse me..God.

Spot the sensative artist. (wanker)
 
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Mr B

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The poem is poorly constructed anyway...

Don't they teach scansion or verse structure or the rules of para-rhyming in the US?

*nb. apologies if you are from the UK, have you considered a move to the US where people with your particular learning disorder can be treated?*

Where's the visualisation? The Metaphor?

If you're going to spout quasi-religious shite (which I hope you will never do again) at least do a good job of it. If you are going to quote the bible (eye for an eye) then do the courtesy of quoting it IN context and also try and find the "turn the other cheek" quote as well.

fukin chutney-juggler I dunno

:/

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