DLgamer-oot
Fledgling Freddie
- Joined
- Mar 25, 2005
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- 93
stupeh said:It's true what they say, comedy is dead.
I liked your entry at least the idea behind it but to me clinged way too much to the original to be in the top 4.
I would have loved to see you stray a bit more from the original material, i started enjoying the work but as i read it, i had a copy/paste/replace names feeling that grew until it killed the story for me.