j00ster
Fledgling Freddie
- Joined
- Oct 25, 2004
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- 153
Hey , ive been working on a song and got some lyrics together, thought id post it and see what u guys think ,or if anything needs improving.
Im not entirely sure of the name and perhaps certain parts could be improved but they
Twisted Prophecy
The day was gone and soon entered night
a once content land filled with woeful plight
the time of men will soon run thin
As the twisted prophecy begins
You can take my life but not my soul
As the truth behind the fate of men unfolds
With conviction i trust in my blade
to send this evil back from whence it came
The the dark priest whispers in my ear
"join with us my son and there is nothing to fear"
"Never! Your words are but poison to thee
Your sins will now be for god to take heed"
You can take my life but not my soul
As the truth behind the fate of men unfolds
With conviction i trust in my blade
to send this evil back from whence it came
From the infernal monastary the demons led
to seek the blood of the innocent to shed
But the templars stand with might and valour
to fight the prophecy in our darkest hour
You can take my life but not my soul
As the truth behind the fate of men unfolds
With conviction i trust in my blade
to send this evil back from whence it came
Im not entirely sure of the name and perhaps certain parts could be improved but they
Twisted Prophecy
The day was gone and soon entered night
a once content land filled with woeful plight
the time of men will soon run thin
As the twisted prophecy begins
You can take my life but not my soul
As the truth behind the fate of men unfolds
With conviction i trust in my blade
to send this evil back from whence it came
The the dark priest whispers in my ear
"join with us my son and there is nothing to fear"
"Never! Your words are but poison to thee
Your sins will now be for god to take heed"
You can take my life but not my soul
As the truth behind the fate of men unfolds
With conviction i trust in my blade
to send this evil back from whence it came
From the infernal monastary the demons led
to seek the blood of the innocent to shed
But the templars stand with might and valour
to fight the prophecy in our darkest hour
You can take my life but not my soul
As the truth behind the fate of men unfolds
With conviction i trust in my blade
to send this evil back from whence it came