Hi there. This is my first attempt of writing a story. The beginning was actually written a few months ago but I never got around to continuing it until now. Please give your opinions on what was good and what was bad.
The hour was late, the moon was up and a cold wind was blowing. It was one of the very last days of the fall, promising more cold as the winter grew. It was the kind of night when most people huddle up in front of the fire with some heated spiced wine and a good story.
The only sounds heard in the great forest, known as skona ravine, was the sounds of the nocturnal inhabitants of the forest waking up and preparing for the everlasting hunt for food. A badger was making her way trough the brush, looking for something to bring home to her little ones. As she was carefully making her way, following her keen senses towards some unknown goal she suddenly stopped in her tracks. She tilted her head, listening into the wind. There came a sound as of someone running headlong trough the forest, careless of what may be in front of them. The sound was of someone, or something, running for their life! The little badger scurried away as fast as she could and vanished in a hole in the ground under a fallen tree.
The sound grew stronger as the runner came closer, the cracking of fallen branches was accompanied by someone breathing hard. All of a sudden a figure was seen as a silhouette against the moonlight. The runner was a young girl, not yet 18 years of age. Her eyes shone with fear and her cheeks glistened with tears. I do not know if it was because of the darkness in the forest or if it was the exhaustion from all the running but somehow the girl got her foot caught in a root and tumbled into a rock under a nearby tree. The terrible cracking of bones breaking was heard and the girl let out a cry of pain. She tried getting up but her broken leg wouldn't carry her weight. In a last desperate attempt to get away the girl tried to crawl on the way she had been heading but to no use, the pain was too much to bear for her and she sank down with her back to a tree. She thought she heard another sound coming from somewhere in the direction she had been running but it was soon drowned out as other sounds was heard. Sounds of someone else running trough the woods with weapons clinking as they ran. The girl sat there crying, looking as if all hope was lost as thirteen dirty, unshaven men ran into the little clearing bordered by the tree where our frightened girl was sitting. The men was panting hard from the effort of running as they stopped and smiled at the girl, who was now sobbing from exhaustion, pain and fear. The men all wore different kinds of armor, but they all had the same mark on their shields and helmets. The mark was of a hand holding a severed arm and you could easily see that these men were the kind that mothers used to scare their children with. The leader of the men, an unusually large man with a tattoo on his face, took a few steps towards the girl.
- You are a good runner girl, but that wont help you now. We will make you pay for making us run after you, you can be sure of that. Too bad we cant sell you to the slave traders, you would bring us much money, but I have my orders. I'm afraid we will just have to kill you right here and now where you will never be found.
- The first one who touches me gets a knife in the ribs for their trouble, the girl said between her sobs as she was drawing her small belt knife. Anyone could see that this was a person who was gonna fight to the bitter end even though there was no chance of surviving
All the men laughed, a grim sound. They knew that they could easily take care of this little girl without getting more than a few scratches at the most. The leader spoke once more;
- Say your last prayers little one for we must end this here and now.
As the girl sat there awaiting her doom she could once again hear the beautiful sound, but this time it was much closer. She could clearly hear that the sound was of someone singing. Somehow she felt refreshed and not quite as tired and frightened as she had just moments ago. Just as the leader of the men was about to reach the girl a commanding voice was heard from behind the tree which the girl was sitting by.
-STOP!! The voice said and around the tree stepped a stunningly beautiful woman. At her side a dwarf planted his solid body between the men and the girl, all the while singing the beautiful song the girl had heard. She understood that this was one of the followers of bragi, the people known as skalds.
- What goes here, the woman asked. thirteen ugly halfogres, judging by the looks, bearing down on a hurt and terrified girl. Too clumsy to make a living as cutpurses in Jordheim perhaps?, the woman continued.
- You have no business here woman, move along or we will kill your friend along with the girl and sell you as a slave.
- Do you hear that friends, the woman said with a smile on her face, they are gonna sell me as a slave.
A laughter was heard and seemingly out of nowhere a tall man with a bow slung over his shoulder materialized out of the shadows on the other side of the tree.
- We'll just see about that Andine, said yet another man walking into the clearing.
The men was taken aback by the eerie light emitting from the man, a faint light surrounding him completely. He held a staff, black as night as he calmly eyed the men.
The skald spoke in a low voice;
- Andine, this girl need your help. Let us deal with this scum while you take care of her.
- Sure Ahlgard, just wait for Rotcev. You know how he gets if you get into a fight without him being here, she said as she knelt next to the stunned girl, carefully examining her wounds.
As these words were spoken the clinking of metal was heard along with someone breathing hard. Into the clearing strode a huge troll. Ten feet in height and half as wide he was and carrying heavy armor along with a huge shield.
- I thought you would never stop he said as he was trying to catch his breath. But what is this, more exercise by the looks of things, he said with a wide grin in his broad face.
The leader of the brutes spoke to the friends who was obviously going to try to protect the girl.
- We are thirteen and there are just five of you. Leave now and we will let you live.
The hunter answered;
- Lives will be spilled tonight but they will not be ours. If you ever wish to see the sun again, lay down your weapons and return from wherever you came from.
The song the skald had been singing took on a completely different note. From being beautiful and uplifting it turned dark and menacing.
The leader of the brutes never answered, instead he made a charge towards Andine and the girl, thinking to take out the easy targets first. He never made it to them. The hunters hands seemed to blur as he drew his bow, nocked and arrow and shot with a speed to fast for the eye to see what was happening. The leader stumbled backwards with the arrow in his throat, trying to claw it out.
All of a sudden there was movement everywhere as the remaining men attacked. Althuriak was swinging wildly with his hammer, fending off two attackers at once. One of the brutes threw an axe at the man glowing with the strange light. Just when the axe was about to strike it suddenly bounced away, seemingly without hitting anything. At the same time the man called Searer, he's real name was unknown to all but a few, was moving his hands and whispering an incantation. As he flung his hands out a ball of pure darkness soared trough the air. The ball was dark enough to make the night seem bright. The ball of pure darkness sizzled trough the air and hit the axe thrower in the chest. He was lifted off the ground by the force of the impact and when his short flight was ended by the trunk of a great tree he was already dead, smoke rising from where his chest had been.
One of the men had made it past the skald and the hunter, who now had added even more to the tally of dead outlaws, and was just unleashing a mighty swing at the healer trying to help the girl. Just as he was screaming with triumph, sure of his kill, an enormous shield slammed into him with bone breaking power.
- No one tries to hurt Andine and lives to talk about it, Rotcev said with murder in his eyes as he unhooked his huge battlehammer from his belt. The outlaws scream turned into one of pure terror as the huge troll bore down on him. An awful sound of bones breaking was heard as the grim troll slammed home with his hammer.
The four still standing men threw down their weapons and ran off into the forest, scared witless of what they had seen. They were accompanied by a powerful roaring as a big tree next to them exploded in dark flames. The runemaster started to walk in the direction they had been running as the voice of Andine called him back.
- Searer, I need you here to start a fire so I can tend to this poor girl properly. Just don’t let your powers get away from you, we don’t want to start another forest fire.
- I will be careful, the runemaster answered as he began collecting firewood. Just because I make one misstake when I'm tired I get to hear it for the rest of my life, he muttered as he worked.
- I will see where they go, the hunter said and just disappeared from view.
- It always make me a little uneasy when he just disappears like that, Althuriak admitted.
Before long they had a fire going and the girl, under the skilled hands of Andine, was recovering quickly. In the distance they hear a wild howling as of wolves hunting under the full moon, only much more powerful. Another hour passed as they were tending their weapons and having a meal consisting of dried meat and water, the food always used when travelling. The towering shape of Rotcev was seen as he was standing lookout. Reassured that no one could get past him they lounged close to the fire.
- Falling asleep are we, a voice was heard in their midst. The hunter had returned from his scouting. I followed them as they ran straight into Malmöhus, not the smartest place to be on a night when the full moon is up, he said. They didn’t make it very far before the drakulvs spotted them and, well, I guess you can figure the rest.
- Good, then we are spared of the trouble of tracking them down and see that justice is done. Too bad that we didn't get to interrogate one of them to see what they wanted with this little girl before we dispatched them, Althuriak said. So far we haven’t been able to get any sense from the girl herself, the chock I guess. We best get some sleep, tomorrow we start to unravel the mystery of why they were so intent on killing her.
Once more everything was quiet in the woods, only the faint crackling from the fire was heard as they drifted off to sleep...
The hour was late, the moon was up and a cold wind was blowing. It was one of the very last days of the fall, promising more cold as the winter grew. It was the kind of night when most people huddle up in front of the fire with some heated spiced wine and a good story.
The only sounds heard in the great forest, known as skona ravine, was the sounds of the nocturnal inhabitants of the forest waking up and preparing for the everlasting hunt for food. A badger was making her way trough the brush, looking for something to bring home to her little ones. As she was carefully making her way, following her keen senses towards some unknown goal she suddenly stopped in her tracks. She tilted her head, listening into the wind. There came a sound as of someone running headlong trough the forest, careless of what may be in front of them. The sound was of someone, or something, running for their life! The little badger scurried away as fast as she could and vanished in a hole in the ground under a fallen tree.
The sound grew stronger as the runner came closer, the cracking of fallen branches was accompanied by someone breathing hard. All of a sudden a figure was seen as a silhouette against the moonlight. The runner was a young girl, not yet 18 years of age. Her eyes shone with fear and her cheeks glistened with tears. I do not know if it was because of the darkness in the forest or if it was the exhaustion from all the running but somehow the girl got her foot caught in a root and tumbled into a rock under a nearby tree. The terrible cracking of bones breaking was heard and the girl let out a cry of pain. She tried getting up but her broken leg wouldn't carry her weight. In a last desperate attempt to get away the girl tried to crawl on the way she had been heading but to no use, the pain was too much to bear for her and she sank down with her back to a tree. She thought she heard another sound coming from somewhere in the direction she had been running but it was soon drowned out as other sounds was heard. Sounds of someone else running trough the woods with weapons clinking as they ran. The girl sat there crying, looking as if all hope was lost as thirteen dirty, unshaven men ran into the little clearing bordered by the tree where our frightened girl was sitting. The men was panting hard from the effort of running as they stopped and smiled at the girl, who was now sobbing from exhaustion, pain and fear. The men all wore different kinds of armor, but they all had the same mark on their shields and helmets. The mark was of a hand holding a severed arm and you could easily see that these men were the kind that mothers used to scare their children with. The leader of the men, an unusually large man with a tattoo on his face, took a few steps towards the girl.
- You are a good runner girl, but that wont help you now. We will make you pay for making us run after you, you can be sure of that. Too bad we cant sell you to the slave traders, you would bring us much money, but I have my orders. I'm afraid we will just have to kill you right here and now where you will never be found.
- The first one who touches me gets a knife in the ribs for their trouble, the girl said between her sobs as she was drawing her small belt knife. Anyone could see that this was a person who was gonna fight to the bitter end even though there was no chance of surviving
All the men laughed, a grim sound. They knew that they could easily take care of this little girl without getting more than a few scratches at the most. The leader spoke once more;
- Say your last prayers little one for we must end this here and now.
As the girl sat there awaiting her doom she could once again hear the beautiful sound, but this time it was much closer. She could clearly hear that the sound was of someone singing. Somehow she felt refreshed and not quite as tired and frightened as she had just moments ago. Just as the leader of the men was about to reach the girl a commanding voice was heard from behind the tree which the girl was sitting by.
-STOP!! The voice said and around the tree stepped a stunningly beautiful woman. At her side a dwarf planted his solid body between the men and the girl, all the while singing the beautiful song the girl had heard. She understood that this was one of the followers of bragi, the people known as skalds.
- What goes here, the woman asked. thirteen ugly halfogres, judging by the looks, bearing down on a hurt and terrified girl. Too clumsy to make a living as cutpurses in Jordheim perhaps?, the woman continued.
- You have no business here woman, move along or we will kill your friend along with the girl and sell you as a slave.
- Do you hear that friends, the woman said with a smile on her face, they are gonna sell me as a slave.
A laughter was heard and seemingly out of nowhere a tall man with a bow slung over his shoulder materialized out of the shadows on the other side of the tree.
- We'll just see about that Andine, said yet another man walking into the clearing.
The men was taken aback by the eerie light emitting from the man, a faint light surrounding him completely. He held a staff, black as night as he calmly eyed the men.
The skald spoke in a low voice;
- Andine, this girl need your help. Let us deal with this scum while you take care of her.
- Sure Ahlgard, just wait for Rotcev. You know how he gets if you get into a fight without him being here, she said as she knelt next to the stunned girl, carefully examining her wounds.
As these words were spoken the clinking of metal was heard along with someone breathing hard. Into the clearing strode a huge troll. Ten feet in height and half as wide he was and carrying heavy armor along with a huge shield.
- I thought you would never stop he said as he was trying to catch his breath. But what is this, more exercise by the looks of things, he said with a wide grin in his broad face.
The leader of the brutes spoke to the friends who was obviously going to try to protect the girl.
- We are thirteen and there are just five of you. Leave now and we will let you live.
The hunter answered;
- Lives will be spilled tonight but they will not be ours. If you ever wish to see the sun again, lay down your weapons and return from wherever you came from.
The song the skald had been singing took on a completely different note. From being beautiful and uplifting it turned dark and menacing.
The leader of the brutes never answered, instead he made a charge towards Andine and the girl, thinking to take out the easy targets first. He never made it to them. The hunters hands seemed to blur as he drew his bow, nocked and arrow and shot with a speed to fast for the eye to see what was happening. The leader stumbled backwards with the arrow in his throat, trying to claw it out.
All of a sudden there was movement everywhere as the remaining men attacked. Althuriak was swinging wildly with his hammer, fending off two attackers at once. One of the brutes threw an axe at the man glowing with the strange light. Just when the axe was about to strike it suddenly bounced away, seemingly without hitting anything. At the same time the man called Searer, he's real name was unknown to all but a few, was moving his hands and whispering an incantation. As he flung his hands out a ball of pure darkness soared trough the air. The ball was dark enough to make the night seem bright. The ball of pure darkness sizzled trough the air and hit the axe thrower in the chest. He was lifted off the ground by the force of the impact and when his short flight was ended by the trunk of a great tree he was already dead, smoke rising from where his chest had been.
One of the men had made it past the skald and the hunter, who now had added even more to the tally of dead outlaws, and was just unleashing a mighty swing at the healer trying to help the girl. Just as he was screaming with triumph, sure of his kill, an enormous shield slammed into him with bone breaking power.
- No one tries to hurt Andine and lives to talk about it, Rotcev said with murder in his eyes as he unhooked his huge battlehammer from his belt. The outlaws scream turned into one of pure terror as the huge troll bore down on him. An awful sound of bones breaking was heard as the grim troll slammed home with his hammer.
The four still standing men threw down their weapons and ran off into the forest, scared witless of what they had seen. They were accompanied by a powerful roaring as a big tree next to them exploded in dark flames. The runemaster started to walk in the direction they had been running as the voice of Andine called him back.
- Searer, I need you here to start a fire so I can tend to this poor girl properly. Just don’t let your powers get away from you, we don’t want to start another forest fire.
- I will be careful, the runemaster answered as he began collecting firewood. Just because I make one misstake when I'm tired I get to hear it for the rest of my life, he muttered as he worked.
- I will see where they go, the hunter said and just disappeared from view.
- It always make me a little uneasy when he just disappears like that, Althuriak admitted.
Before long they had a fire going and the girl, under the skilled hands of Andine, was recovering quickly. In the distance they hear a wild howling as of wolves hunting under the full moon, only much more powerful. Another hour passed as they were tending their weapons and having a meal consisting of dried meat and water, the food always used when travelling. The towering shape of Rotcev was seen as he was standing lookout. Reassured that no one could get past him they lounged close to the fire.
- Falling asleep are we, a voice was heard in their midst. The hunter had returned from his scouting. I followed them as they ran straight into Malmöhus, not the smartest place to be on a night when the full moon is up, he said. They didn’t make it very far before the drakulvs spotted them and, well, I guess you can figure the rest.
- Good, then we are spared of the trouble of tracking them down and see that justice is done. Too bad that we didn't get to interrogate one of them to see what they wanted with this little girl before we dispatched them, Althuriak said. So far we haven’t been able to get any sense from the girl herself, the chock I guess. We best get some sleep, tomorrow we start to unravel the mystery of why they were so intent on killing her.
Once more everything was quiet in the woods, only the faint crackling from the fire was heard as they drifted off to sleep...