The lets help Damini out thread

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Tom

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Well I voted 1 because it was the best one there. You gotta admin though, that Damini being the first one read does give a slight advantage....
 
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ECA

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Originally posted by 1tchy trigger
Yay I voted for the right one then - actually it was the best ... although I was intrigued by a talking squirrel


Was it called Super Gray? And scouse?
 
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old.Fweddy

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I voted for you Dams!

You need to write more stuff though.
 
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old.Kez

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Originally posted by Dr_Weasel
Like in Ghostbusters when the ghosts are trapped and put in the containment thingy. What would happen if you blew that up huh??
They escape and the ghostbusters have to hunt them all down again. It happened every other episode.
 
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mank!

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Originally posted by old.Kez
They escape and the ghostbusters have to hunt them all down again. It happened every other episode.

ffs spoilers tbh
 
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Sar

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That makes you and Wij both.

Wij loves your entry.






:uhoh:
 
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whipped

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Personally I didn't like the Von Richtton Prison one. Seemed a bit to Jame's bond with the prison on stilts. Not bad structure in it, but the Ghosts one reads the best.

Is this from the same story you entered as a child Dam? The one that got disqualified.
 
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Damini

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It's a variation of the story I wrote as a child, but obviously there's a world of difference between writing a story as a 9 year old or so, and then writing one as a 24 year old :)

I can't see it being possible for me to win now, but I gave it a good crack :) Second out of 600 odd is alright.
 
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Scooba Da Bass

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I'll stick it up on the SA forums, cue 19,000 goon votes.
 
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Wazzerphuk

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Bit of a stingy competetion - it's pretty hard to judge a writer on a single paragraph, I was most disappointed when I got to the site. Still, never mind - your was the best imho dams, gl, you got my vote.
 
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MYstIC G

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Originally posted by Damini
Hey, no rigging the vote. If I win I want to win because I deserve to!

So go along, and vote for which ever one you like most.
*rig* :D

(It's the best one anyway)
 
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Scooba Da Bass

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mehehe about 250 votes from the SA goons so far, expect more when the rest of America wakes up.
 
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old.tRoG

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Yay :)

Damini's is the best, though. That Von Richten prison one is utter shite.
 
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Summo

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Originally posted by Scooba Da Bass
mehehe about 250 votes from the SA goons so far, expect more when the rest of America wakes up.
Blimey! Scoobs started a thread in the SA forums and so far his account over there hasn't been banned yet.

S'only a matter of time.
 
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old.D0LLySh33p

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I quite like the... wait a minute... that was the bbc url. doh :(

GO DAMini1

VOte !!!111
 
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old.Fweddy

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Inspired by Damini's storytelling prowess, Fweddy decided to post in third person, to hone his own skills.
'Well done Damini', he said.
Damini felt a warm glow inside until he continued '...you write very well for a dyslexic person', deliberately trying to provoke a reaction.
 
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Testin da Cable

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TdC stood well back as the onrushing mind bullet projected by Damini impacted the grinning Fweddy like a terminal velocity patachutist slamming into a concrete bunker.
Flicking a few errant shreds of Fwed off his purple one piece pluche pimp-o-matic jumpsuit with a daintily manicured fingernail, TdC turned to Lou and said "Egads my dear, I really need to lay off the Douglas Adams for a while!"
 
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old.Fweddy

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Fweddy died and became a ghost. Now, some ghosts are all lightning and fierce eyes, chains rattling and dramatic wailing. Some ghosts are made of mischief and mayhem, re-arranging furniture when backs are turned and laughing a silent laugh at shocked faces. Some ghosts are made of centuries of tears, and just seeing them makes you feel sad for weeks after. Some ghosts are just like normal people, just a more see-through shade of real. And some ghosts, ghosts like Fweddy, are made of cloud, and no firm edges, and aren't very ghost like at all. Ghosts like Fweddy don't make you feel scared, or confused, or sad: ghosts like Fweddy you tend not to notice at all. And this didn't impress Fweddy one bit.
 
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Scooba Da Bass

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I'll go bump my SA thread, see if I can get 50 more people to vote.
 

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