Saga of Daoc excal part one.

[Zzang]

I sat down and started writing, after looking into the tips i got from you all.
Remember i cant take in everybodys names in the story at once,
i will take in whoever i choose, but if ppl think this was fun, i will write a followup and maybe more.

I RESERVE MYSELF FROM SPELLING ERRORS.
cba installing word and i'm not perfect
Thankful for any advices / oppinions, even the bad ones.

Enjoy your reading.

Remember, this is just the beginning. (and yes i am a noob writer )

Saga of Daoc excal part one.

 

[Sollers]

solid mate, I liked it

 

[Twinky]

King Xanatea..

:worthy:

liked it!

Didnt see the ladejarl Thordill BraakjekkSon tho

 

[Downanael]

Infils should have won that fight tbh,they were 4 afterall!

 

[rampant]

is the spelling bad on purpose?

 

[Zzang]

it's a combination of lazyness, bad english and being tired.
a) i cba to check my spelling
b) all my english come from gaming chats
c) it was 9am wtf!

 

[Bibop]

strong

 

[Brack]

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Heste pwned xD

 

[Urgluf]

nice ^^

next one you will have to add draxa tho!

 

[Talivar]

enjoyed it

 

[Brack]

should be a battle between pain and post mortem xD

 

[Twinky]

should be a battle between pain and post mortem xD

that would be nice

 

[Calo]

I suggest u put a mole in the story and name it Belomar... afterall.. he's a mole right?

 

[- English -]

i should become the future ruler of the world and calo as my servent

 

[Iorlas]

very good imo.. carry on plz.

 

[[NO]Subedai]

really liked it

now givf General Korgon!

 

[Knolan]

i think it was very nice, i hope you make more, but i also hope you develop some more diversety in names.

and btw.. no dr00ds, healers,clerics? and no wizzie, would have expected a zoyster/iorlas/xandro name in there

 

[Dyss]

really nice reading at work keep up the good work m8zor

w8ing for the zerkers to split the wizz and luwis in ½´s

 

[Aurores]

haha :worthy: :worthy:

 

[Lethul]

really nice reading at work keep up the good work m8zor

w8ing for the zerkers to split the wizz and luwis in ½´s

im waiting for closecombat expert mumin to poke someones eyes out

 

[Dr_Evil]

I'm amazed! Keep it going!

 

[Urme the Legend]

Nice story, and the most important thing was that I was in it

 

[Soromaar]

nice zzanger

/clap

 

[Species]

rofl, enjoyed that, the little spelling errors left asside ofcourse

 

[prozze]

best ever! :worthy:

 

[tookha]

All I read was "King Xanatea". Closed it after that.