Read along with Damini...

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Sar

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How about waiting until tomorrow (also a Tuesday) instead?

;)
 
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Sar

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Yus, and I am off work until next Wednesday!




HUZZAH!



xD :D
 
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mank!

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heheh nice. Doesn't she looked thrilled to have won in her picture? :D
 
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Testin da Cable

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and I have a long weekend coming up, BOOCHAKA!!! :D


Lou == win!
 
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Clowneh!

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happy damini!

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Damini

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I love having my photo taken, it fills me with unbridled joy. Hence the smiley :)

And its kinda cool having my story up, but they've broken it down into dinky bite sized nuggets and it makes it feel all weird and chunky to me. I'm just being a pedant though.

Please note the reference to Goons, and the citizens advice bureau.
 
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Damini

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Erm, cheers Sar.



They're trying to get J K Rowling to review my story.









:eek6:

How terrifying?
 
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ECA

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You should have had a picceh of the BW forums w/ the green layout on the screen when the pic was taken :)

Other than that, it reads quite well, I think maybe because of your dyslexia you've tried to write something that would grip someone so that people with difficulties dont have problems with teh boring bits.

Good so far anyway keep it up :-]
 
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Testin da Cable

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Originally posted by Damini
Erm, cheers Sar.



They're trying to get J K Rowling to review my story.

:eek6:

How terrifying?
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as long as she didn't read your original comments it should go just fine ;)
 
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Uncle Sick(tm)

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A very nice story actually - will print it out for the kids later. :)
Mr. and Mrs. Scruffles... that one made me laugh by the way.


(See? I am not grumpy all the time :p)

A well deserved first place, Smaldini.
 
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old.Fweddy

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How come the prize winning opening paragraph is now four paragraphs long?
 
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Damini

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They've made alterations to the format in order to make it easier to read on a website.


I've just been contacted and asked if I want my story translated in Croatian. Today is deeply steeped in weird.
 
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Summo

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I really like that chapter. I like this a lot. :D
 
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whipped

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Posted.If my comment get's in, look for the criptic mention of BarrysWorld.

Oh, well done btw Lou. The first exceprt seems good, can't wait to read the rest through the week.
 
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Damini

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Is it good enough to get published? Harsh! Especially since its only the very opening, and they've cut it up a bit.


God, thats got me scared.
 
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Gef

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"Sadness Summoner" - Aint they from DAoC? ;)

Nice story, I think you should post the whole thing on here to give us BW's 'exclusive' access :p
 
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Meatballs

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You live in Canterbury? Cool im going to uni there in september (hopefully). I can get my prinout signed by a real star!
:clap:

The tempo of the story reminds me a lot of Roald Dahl, that very easy-to-read style that appeals to kids everywhere. My own son Barry, world's ahead of me in what makes a good children's story, enjoyed the first day's excerpt and will be tuning in to see how the story progresses.
Kevin Pascoe, England
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is that someone here?
 
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Testin da Cable

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posted by an anonymous cow herd
rooling su><0rs!! harry p0tt0r cvraves teh co><!! damini r0><0rs j00r bo><Orz d00dz!!
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I like it, tis very light and I feel a current of supressed mirth bubbling just below the surface...though that may be the espresso powder I just snorted :)
 
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