Pilot episodes of a comic idea

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Ez and I came up with an idea for a comic strip. below is the background information on the character burt -

burt was a genetic experiment, his mother didnt have a womb so had to grow his embryo in the holding tube of a super soaker 5000. he is a spontaneous masturbator, and maybe what he says isnt always what you think he means... and he has the worst medical condition known to man - ejaculitus.

the above info should help you see the humour in the following comic strips :)

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burt - pt1
burt - pt2

We would like to know if you maybe interested in more adventures of burt?
what do you think? :cheer

edit: the comics name is Worth a shot.
 

Ezteq

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rofl sod off do i look like rolf harris.... nm


tris our baby is out here all on his own!
 

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I prefered the gingerbread wings and fusilage shaped cookies idea :(
 

old.Tohtori

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Not really interested.

It's fun on a forum, at times, to make a bad pun or a funny comment, but watching that just for watching it. Not really. The quality is just, well, bad.

Not really liking the "we can't draw it so i'll stick a picture in" style.

Ejaculating guy doing things topic is a bit too "elementary school" too.
 
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old.Tohtori said:
Not really interested.

It's fun on a forum, at times, to make a bad pun or a funny comment, but watching that just for watching it. Not really. The quality is just, well, bad.

Not really liking the "we can't draw it so i'll stick a picture in" style.

Ejaculating guy doing things topic is a bit too "elementary school" too.
How rude :p People are polite enough not to slag off your work :(
 

old.Tohtori

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Aoln said:
How rude :p People are polite enough not to slag off your work :(

It's not rude, it's feedback and it was asked for. If someone were to slag off my work, i'd appreciate the honesty and try to change things if i saw it as feedback that would improve the work i want it to be.

I'm not syaing "boo crap hiss", i'm giving an opinion.

Every artist, web bloger, forumite, person should take critisism, it's not personal, it's just feedback.
 

Ezteq

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Tbh it was literally our baby, we had the idea last night and just drew it so it was only about an hour old, so dont be too harsh remember how shitty the piolet episodes for most things usually are?
 

old.Tohtori

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Fine!

It was great!! :worthy:

Keep up the good work!

...gees...don't ask for opinions if you don't want them...

Next time i'll ask if you want an opinion or a praise.
 

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the snake one is quite good i think..

<waits for rice to cook faster so i can eat my chicken jalfrezi>
 

Ezteq

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old.Tohtori said:
Fine!

It was great!! :worthy:

Keep up the good work!

...gees...don't ask for opinions if you don't want them...

Next time i'll ask if you want an opinion or a praise.
oh ffs behave :p

i didnt say dont critisise i was just explaining that it was like the first one ever and bear in mind the 1st attempt isnt usually very good, you gave your opionion and thank you, i didnt like it but thanks for sharing all feed back is helpful but rather than people saying how crap the drawing is (*cough* ms paint only here) we actually wanted feedback on the general idea which you gave so there.


so stop being dramatic and have a chuppa chup :fluffle:
 

old.Tohtori

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Ezteq said:
oh ffs behave :p

i didnt say dont critisise i was just explaining that it was like the first one ever and bear in mind the 1st attempt isnt usually very good, you gave your opionion and thank you, i didnt like it but thanks for sharing all feed back is helpful but rather than people saying how crap the drawing is (*cough* ms paint only here) we actually wanted feedback on the general idea which you gave so there.


so stop being dramatic and have a chuppa chup :fluffle:

I'm not being dramatic, i'm defending my point.

I did comment on the subject as well.

I do behave, but evidently you(you, as in any individual including me in a sarcastic manner) can't "discuss" items if they don't fit the mood of the person.

Only reason i'm defending myself is because people didn't like the honest opinion.
 

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people dont have to like an opionion to respect it (i.e someone tells you your breath smells like haddock, you dont like it but your glad they tell you... i always am)

and tbh an honest opionion that i dont like is far better than a false complimentary one.
 

old.Tohtori

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Well said, i was merely forcing my point of having the right to give a negative opinion too.

good that people can still talk civil about things and not go to the whole flame flame ping pong :D

And even though i may not like your work, doesn't mean i dislike you :sex:
 

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