Gna Faste - the great divide

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thestoryteller

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I look at my birth village of Gna Faste with a foul taste in my mouth. Memories long gone of the days I once played in the woods with my father, gathering timber for his crafts, trading with the Arachite and Svartalf who dwelled nearby. Those fond memories tainted by the day they came, the monstrous wolven beasts with glowing eyes of pure hate, the Drakulv.

For the past fifteen seasons I have grown up with my grandparents, who have done their best to tame the wild hatred that’s lived inside of me for all these years. Far way in Haggerfel they kept me from returning to the place where my lifes path was turned into a bloody nightmare. For all this time I still can see the darkened night when they came to our peaceful village, ransacked our homes, slaying all those in their path.

Danima Ulofsonn, my mother and the greatest tailor in the realm. My father, Kedric the most prized weapon smith of all Midgard. We lived in Gna Faste for as long as I could remember, my parents traded food and clothing with the Svartalf who mined Sindlehalla, under the watchful eye of the Arachite. He would buy their precious metals, and repair their tools when needed, the Arachite only came to us for food during the winter, the rest of the year they would roam in packs through the undergrowth. Together it seemed for formed a symbiotic family, living in harmony.

It was the winter of my tenth season. A village meeting had been called; a stranger was coming to town to ask for a truce. I remember the mists that night were eerily thick, even the hunters had returned early from the southern edge of Myrkwood, even their vision impaired by the fog.

The townsfolk gathered outside the guard tower on the edge of the village; young and old alike the whispers and rumours grew louder with anticipation of this arrival. All the elders had said was the visitor was coming from Skona Ravine, a place my father had told me once was home to many Vikings, but now lay deserted after a great battle, with whom I knew not, as no-one ever discussed it further.

I could hear some of the villager’s words, “cannot be trusted” one announced, “betrayal I smell” the voice of another came. But yet still we waited in the cold night air.

A silence befell the village, one of the guards on the tower bellowed “To the west, they come!”, and all eyes faced down the path. Through the misty haze, five shadows tall and broad came, in the darkness I could see their eyes glowing red, and their ivory fangs shone in the torch light. This was the first time I had seen any of the Drakulv, beings I had grown to believe mythological, only fables had been told to frighten small children, myself included. Seeing them in the flesh however, put those stories to shame.

The party of five drew into the centre of the circle. The largest one stretched up his arms high and gave a deep and terrifying growl echoing around the crowd. I could feel the fear in everyone around me, my mother grasped my hand as tight as she could, it hurt that I knew, but my mind blocked the pain as I stared in awe at this menacing creature.

“We claim the right Askheim, our sacred burial ground that lies to the west, you will no longer desecrate, know you’re boundaries humans, and keep your troll bretheren away from our domain! Any who should feel it their business to venture into our lands will not return, this is your only warning!”

Askheim was a burial ground, once used by the Svartalf as a religious ground, but now was fenced in to protect the souls buried within. Since my earliest memory it had always been this way. We had always respected their grounds.

“Lord Garthed, the Svartalf grounds are sacred, we cannot give you this land, it belongs not to us, and you should seek their consort.” the village elder cried.

“Weak minded fools, you have had your only warning, if you desire to tell the Svart, so be it, they would not dare oppose us!”. Steam poured from his drooling mouth as he uttered his words, the elder backed away slowly, with a look of terror on his face.

“My Lord, we have no quarrel with you and your kind, we beg you leave our village and respect the lands of the Svartalf.”

The Drakulv turned his back on the elder, before walking off he muttered “A warning you have, none more shall we give!”.

The five started back the way they came, brushing aside the warrior guards in their path, growling menacingly, their eyes filled with hatred. Silence befell the crowd as they departed, wide eyed and pale faced they stared at the retreating aggressors.

Behind us the bushes rustled rhythmically, although something was stepping through them. The branches parted and several Svartalf stepped into view. I recognised their leader, one my father had often traded with in the past. He stepped forward and bowed to the elders;

“This has been a long time coming, the priestess Araxia of the Arachite fortold of this day, you must leave the village, go to safer grounds of Gotar. This fight we cannot ask you to help in, we cannot accept your losses in this war.”

Galden, the chief elder spoke up, raising his staff in the air; “For many years we have lived in peace with you, we see you as our kin and friends, we cannot leave you in this moment of need, we are willing to fight besides you!” A huge roar went up from the crowd, swords and hammers raised in fury, the sky lit up with spell casts, my father cast Thors might and the air filled with electricity.

“We ask you not for help, our friends you have been this time tis true. If you stay to fight, we cannot ask you not, but can only thank you deeply. But we beg only the warriors stay, women and children a place for them is not, their blood we cannot have spilt.”

Murmurs rushed through the crowd, heads turning from one partner to another, kin looked at each other with angst, you could see the thought of separation scared the populus.

“Then so it shall be” cried Galden, turning towards his audience, “I beg you all, pack what you need only, take the horses and carts and head to safety in Fort Alta, there warn others of the impending battle, and pray to Odin that he will make this a triumphant battle!” Again the crowd raised its weapons and a huge cheer went up.

My father picked me up, smiling in a way I had not seen for a long time, a glint in his eye once again sparked the fire inside him he had not had since he retired his great hammer. This mighty Thane once more could feel the power flowing through him, and being so close to him I too could feel its awesome beauty. “Take care of your mother boy, you are the man of the family until we reunite, be strong for you both son, may Thor watch over you.” He smiled again as a tear gently rolled down his cheek, clearing a path down his face through the forge soot.
 
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He walked us to the stables next to the smithy, took out his steed and passed the reigns to my mother. Tears rolled down her face too, glistening in the candle light. “The future I cannot see here my love, be brave and strong, I am sure you will looked upon favourably by the gods.” My father put me down, and then reached out to my mother, cradling her gently, as she sobbed into his chest. “Tomorrow this will be over, mark my words, we have nothing to fear. Gently they kissed, and then gazed into each others eyes for what seemed an eternity.

Around us scuffles broke out, people gathering what they could and filling carts and back packs as fast as possible. They ran into each other, pushing and shoving, tripping over their own haste. I could hear the sound of swords and axes being sharpened in the nearby smithy, the bellows on the forge forcing hot air through the white hot coals and the stretching of chain over leather. These were my first sounds or war.

My mother picked up her bags and tossed them over the horses back, fastening them beneath the beast’s belly. With my fathers aid she mounted the horse, then he whisked me up into his arms again and whispered “Be brave young Thane, you’re day will come, every Vikings day comes.” He raised me high into the air, then paused staring at me, smiling before placing me behind my mother on the horse.

“Seek brother Aldiin in Atla, he will shelter you. And make sure that he tells the elders of our plight! May Thor watch you in your sleep my love, return to me when this is done.” More tears ran down his blackened face. My mother remained silent as she turned the horse towards the doors, blowing my father a kiss as she did. Outside a train was forming, pointing north toward the path of safety, all around us I watched families fighting back the emotions as they parted, unknowing the fates the night would bring. Eventually the train began to move, guided by two young warriors with torches held high illuminating the misty airs ahead.

We rode for hours in the dark, passing Natillen we saw more warriors gathering for the final trek into Myrkwood, shields clutched tightly, swords glistening in the cold night air. Truly a sight so menacing nothing would stand in its way I remember thinking gazing in awe at their courage.

As we rode on, I drifted into a deep slumber grasping my mother waist, feeling the comfort of her warmth. My next memory was in my uncle’s house in Atla, and the face of my aunt above me as she tucked me beneath the wolf pelts in her bed, my eyes could not remain open any longer, and sleep crept over me once again.

Dawn came. As I stirred from my slumber the smell of blood hit me instantly, I could hear fires crackling, armour chinking in the damp morn air and the disturbing sound of men writhing in pain. My first sight was my uncle, lying on the floor covered in pelts, with a blood ridden face. I barely recognised him for all the gore, a huge slash ran the length of his cheek, and his auburn hair soaked in the blood from the wound on top of his head. He turned slowly toward me; his eyes vacant as he tried to smile, then the pain took away his grin as it set harder into him.

I rose from my bed, and started to venture toward the open front door; outside already I could see smoke rising from the many small fires lit in the open courtyard, warming those families huddled round them. My mother sat upon the porch outside, leaning into my aunt’s lap, sobbing profusely. Then I knew my father’s fate, for before her lay his shield, its leather exterior blood stained and shredded by many a heavy blow, its top edge cast off and a large hole in its centre where once his mark was. I was motionless for what seemed an eternity, unable to move or speak; no emotions or thoughts came to me, I stood an empty husk.

A hand upon my shoulder brought me back to life; I turned to see the familiar face or Galo Orefsonn, the most famed Shadowblade in Myrkwood, and one of my father’s best friends and patrons.

“This now belongs to you boy, carry it as your father would, don’t let his passing through the gates of Valhalla be in vein.” With this he handed my fathers hammer, its heavy head was just a little too much for me to hold with one hand, but with both I grasped it firmly admiring its beauty, the intricacy of the craftsmanship woven into it.

“Your father earned his place in the world beyond, a true warrior, a gallant hero and my best friend. Kedric will be remembered in song for years to come, may his memory never die.” With that he bowed and turned out towards the towns entrance, vanishing from sight before reaching the gates.

Three of the village elders gathered in the centre of the courtyard, and hailed the surrounding audience “Victory had a high price, Gna Faste has been mostly laid to waste! Our people did not die for nothing; they died protecting our ways, our lands and the property of our friends. We will rebuild, we and the Svartalf will keep the Drakulv at bay, Askheim is their now, but that’s as far as they will go!! MIDGARD IS OUR HOME THEY WILL NOT DRIVE US OUT!”

A huge roar went up from the crowd; my mother stood and waved her staff in the air with them, defiant of the losses around her, so I joined her in this celebration, raising my fathers hammer high, and uttering the words of Mjolliner, letting Thors power strike the weapon. This day, I knew my fathers powers had passed to me, a Thane I was to be.

A few days passed, and gradually villagers started to head back to Gna Faste, sme headed other ways, towards Haggerfell and beyond to avoid seeing the pain of what lay at the site of their old homes. My uncle recovered swiftly from his wounds, and had gone to Gna Faste to help rebuild what was left. Today he returned with others, bringing whatever news they had of our villages fate.

I heard him speaking to my mother and our neighbours from the town, his head held low as he recalled what he had seen.

“The land was crimson with the blood of all who fought, buildings blackened and charred from the fires, there is little left to return to. The only buildings left in this savage raid are the stone guard tower….and Kedrics Smithy!”

My mother clasped her hands over her face, smiling. Our home was safe? He went on; “nothing else could we salvage, but the Svartalf and Arachite have promised to help us rebuild, and offer what they can. The mines are safe for now, people say that spirits appeared in the woods that made the Drakulv run with fear, but no one knows where they came from or who or what they were.”

Well, that’s my story. Perhaps when you are passing by one day, or happen to purchase my wares, say hello, the names Ulwatyl, its always good to meet new blood. Perhaps I can tell you more tales from Myrkwood.
 
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thestoryteller

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Ed note sorry this ones a lil longer, but enjoy anyway
 
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Nazghul-

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bah

Most people are too impatient to read this, but i think it was an enjoyable read.

Keep em coming and ask for a new section on the forums. :)
 
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vofflujarnid

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I think this was a fun part of the story. Very well written and fun.

Keep up the good work :)
 
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Ravenbourne

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Not a middie but a great read :clap:
Shame the losers have to spoil the thread
 
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thestoryteller

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Theres more to come, stay tuned, and thanx for all the kind words.
 
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thestoryteller

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From memory yes there was, alas it seems it was seldom used and therefore abandoned :(

Somehow i dont think they will open it back up just for my little bits :(
 
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thestoryteller

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For the benefit of those who dont like this spam, it will soon be going to a web site, ill post links to the new parts as they come. This may not be for a while, so the next one or two will appear here i expect.

Next installment by sunday I hope.

As for the job at GOA, well if theres one going (kemor n co) ;)
 
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Ironfoot

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The people who flamed this story are the sort of wankers who are only intersted in wtfpwing people.

I say respect to the author and maybe push for a fiction section to post these kind of stories in.

Its much better than reading the usual fucking shit threads here like

FAO feckin_noob_player_from_any_realm

ROFLMAO I WTFPWNED jOO at the (x)MG today, j00 are shit and I am uber and i pwned j00 and your mum with my l33t h4><0R sk1LLz 4tehwin jO0 noobit, all your bases is mine 4tehwin



I can see nothing wrong with this geeser posting a nice story like this. hell this is an rpg.. you hear that you wannabe "I wtfpwn j00" dicks.. an RPG thats ROLE PLAYING GAME in case you dont understand it.

Hopefully see some more nice pieces of work from you mate, was a nice read
 
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hellraisermk2

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Re: Re: Gna Faste - the great divide

Nice read Mr Story guy.
 
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arrakeen

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Its just sad that people have to spoil every thread, really sad if, you dont like RP go make your own threads to make your daily post count reach what you want....

This forum is sad, not a singler good post anymore, no kind word, just flaming all day long... and pointless posts to get a high post count...


Anyway real great story :)
 
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Brinx

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Tidied the thread up so it's readable again. Nice story.

If you don't want to read it that's no reason to creates flames and spoil the thread. Excal OT is full of less roleplaying delights to suit different needs ;)
 
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Damini

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I'm glad someones already edited out the useless vicious drivel that some people have to post. I'm not going to simply tolerate people using these forums with the soul purpose of being arseholes anymore.

Excalibur has a bad reputation for people being immature, l337, and brattish, and its sad that some people just want to compound this image rather than strive against it.

Do you think there is enough story telling to warrant a realm free story telling sub-forum? The old roleplay sections were woefully under used, but do you think that possibly a General Story forum for all servers might get some traffic, or would it be better just cropping up in the normal forums?
 
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Flimgoblin

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keep it in the normal forums - it's not like one post consisting of something other than "+1" every few days is going to kill the l33tness of the posters.

And if it's put in it's own box it'll get ignored and the people who would otherwise read it wouldn't.
 
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Whoodoo_RD

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Im with Flim there, the normal forums do at least get read by most, even if they dont read the full contents, so at least articles like this will get seen by the populus and maybe inspire others....you never know.
 
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eldgrim

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Damini, personally I think a RP forum would be a great idea. It might not get mad traffic right away but it sure will be a nice alternetive to getting every roleplayng related thread burned to ashes in this forum :p
 

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