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Brynn

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i just had a wee bash at it :


anyone have any comments?
 

Tom

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lose the lens flare, its a bit unnatural. If I was extremely critical, I'd say that its slightly overexposed, but otherwise its nice :)
 

Brynn

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Bollox i flattened all the layers thanks for the advice Tom :) :cheers:
 

Scooba da Bass

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Brynn said:
i just had a wee bash at it :


anyone have any comments?
Needs more art and less blank space....unless this is conceptual art in which case send it to Brian Sewell, I'm sure he'd love it.
 

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I'd say it's a bit cluttered, with too little variety.
 

Sar

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Sir Frizz said:
I'd say it's a bit cluttered, with too little variety.
Space tends to be a bit like that.

Bummer eh?

:)
 

Maljonic

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I agree with ditching the lense flare thing, it's the perfect red circle around the middle of the galaxy that puts the viewer directly in front of it, giving them a static feeling that distracts from the rest of the picture. You could put an object in that's a lot closer to add perspective and detail. Good work though. :)
 

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