Caving story

[Recoil101]

http://jrlweb.com/tmp/cavestory/index.htm




that is all......

 

[GDW]

damm there just wasnt enough about caves on this site for me...how inconsiderate

 

[dysfunction]

And if you have too few caves where are all the bats going to live??

 

[S-Gray]

usually outside the cave ?

 

[Recoil101]

 

[Shocko]

Omg, am i the only one to have read all of it?

The "intense" parts of it seriously fucked with my head whilst reading it... I was actually partially convinced, and i don't go for any supernatural shit...

However the ending, or at least how he ended it, made it so obvious it was a ghost story type thing, that i'm no longer feeling nervous :uhoh:

Oh well, i've allready spoiled it for anyone who's not read it, however if i could contact the person, i would ask him why he made it so god damm long :/

 

[Embattle]

Originally posted by Shocko
Omg, am i the only one to have read all of it?

You may well be the only one

 

[S-Gray]

Must have been, i read Half of the First Page, and Closed it heh

 

[Embattle]

I saw the first bit and decided against reading any more

 

[dysfunction]

Me too...it didnt have enough pictures for my liking...

 

[Shocko]

Heh, i find i can picture stuff in my mind whilst reading


I don't actually do much reading really... Considering that i get drawn in as much by words as i do by a visual medium(such as a film), i guess it's odd that i haven't really read any books for over a year.

Anyhow, it took me virtually 1½ hours to read it, so i guess someone else could be reading it... To put the whole story into prospective, for those that only read the first page... Well, i was scared shitless by the scary parts

 

[S-Gray]

Well.. The cave would be located in America.. seen as tho he referred the Road above as a *Highway*... which part tho.. heh

 

[Munkey-]

that certainly had me freaked.

still partially convinced tbh.

*shiver*

 

[S-Gray]

Convinced?!? of what dear boy!?

Im not reading 3,000 about a Cave so spit boy!

 

[dysfunction]

That story is soooo boring! Goes into too much depth about the technicalities of caving and blah blah blah...

So I skim read more and almost fell asleep....

Crap story if you ask me....dont bother reading it!

 

[S-Gray]

heh lucky i didnt then

 

[Shocko]

If you aren't going to read the whole thing, then you won't appreciate the story. Sorry, but if i spelt out what happens, it'll sound shit since you'll have missed out on the tension, that really convinces you that this is a real log, of someone who experianced this.

 

[dysfunction]

Originally posted by Shocko
Sorry, but if i spelt out what happens, it'll sound shit since you'll have missed out on the tension,

What Tension?? There isnt any!

Lots of boredom.....yes...tension...no!

 

[Shocko]

So I skim read more and almost fell asleep....

I believe this is why you didn't notice the tension.

Reading of this kind isn't for those that want scary stories, it's for people who enjoy reading. If you aren't going to happily read every word, then don't read any of it.

 

[dysfunction]

I read the first 4 pages completely and there was absolutely nothing there that could keep me interested...thats why i started to skim read...

 

[Munkey-]

the way he describes it is very good. normally i dont go for horror story as their all a bit crap tbh.

long buildup helped i think as I had no idea what was in it

 

[Shocko]

Obviously you are part of the 'Movie Generation', that is evolving from the American "culture".

I don't blame you for not being able to read, in terms of enjoying it, however i will jump up and down whilst calling you a simpleton

 

[Moving Target]

I read it, not much happened though.

 

[dysfunction]

I usually read a book a week...

by people like: JRR Tolkein; Ian M Banks; Peter F Hamilton; David Eddings; Terry Pratchett; Jonathan Coe; Ian McEwan....etc

...they all have a story which keeps me reading!

Perhaps you need to read some real writing to realise that that story was crap!

 

[old.Kez]

Perhaps you both ought to shut the fuck up with your literature-arrogance©?

 

[dysfunction]

Perhaps... And to you I say

 

[Sar]

Originally posted by old.Kez
Perhaps you both ought to shut the fuck up with your literature-arrogance©?

Poor Kez can't read and has to look at the pretty pictures instead.

 

[Munkey-]

dont enjoy Tolkein tbh.


funny pic dys

 

[old.Kez]

Deep down, I hurt.



(fucking cunt)

 

[Sar]

Heh



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