Initiation

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Addlcove

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well better get to using this then <grin>

The Difference

Though I have made mistakes
I'm still in love with you
though I has told many, that I did not care
I am still in love with you
you know it and you forget it
I feel it in my heart
the way you look at me, the way it used to be
I seek in your heart
feelings for me, feelings to prove
that I have not been forgotten
but I find nothing
the way it used to be, it wont come back
though my mind is clear
I have a darkness above my heart
I look too the sky, searching the reason why
if heaven could answer my prayer
I'd no longer be here
I'd rather live than die
but without you it makes no difference

written by yours truly.

it´s even been published
yes I know that´s showing off <grin>
 
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Addlcove

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<Ramblings of a possessed mind>

they call me Paranoid
they find me insane
I love the feeling
scaring people
the loneliness
killing time
seeking out
women of mine
loneliness
boring me
they call me Paranoid
though I have no name
they find me insane
though I lack the craziness
that drives the world
I am normal as one can be
but I am awake, from the sleep
I seek to awaken my fellow beings
put people live in a dream
they will not volentary give it up
I've won the rewards of the red angel
the angel of mercy seeks me no more
selling my soul to evil
the final exit into the night
 
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Ekydus

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Hah you suck. I'd already had a poem published at the age of 11. :p
 
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Addlcove

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Originally posted by Ekydus
Hah you suck. I'd already had a poem published at the age of 11. :p
weeeee constructive criticism.

I´d swear at you, but it´s against the rules in this forum.
 
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the_fnord

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Originally posted by Ekydus
Hah you suck. I'd already had a poem published at the age of 11. :p
Doesn't make u a better writer! :p
 
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Addlcove

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Flying free
For Silver_Willow

Flying free once again
over valleys and green fields
upon the blue sky above

Feeling the air blow
breathing deep and hard
relaxed upon the skies

Seeing the earth from above
knowing all life will grow
transpire into beauty

Unmolested valleys deep
snowpeeked mountains high
the beauty of the earth unfolds

Flying free once again
steering around the world
looking for you, my love
 

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