English

M

Munkey-

Guest
During english got extremley bored so I wrote a few poems:

Hope in Hopelesness.
Light in life.
The darkness expelled from your meager existence,
Bringing forth the true mettle of self
leaving only what you judge fit,
taking what you deem unworthy.
Your true being exposed to the full glory of a mornings dawn




Red bathes your body
the colour of blood, rage and anger
the history of a thousand years combined into a single moment
the cries of anguish and pain
coupled with the savage mentalities of the human race

A frail woman wailing,
clutching her baby to her breast,
but it doesnt wake up.
A dog howling,
sitting in a crater of destruction,
the search for its master abondoned.

But now a new sound.
Another, another. a thousand times repeated
the rat-a-tat of shattering teeth
the crumps of falling bodies,
Their future ambigious.
But one thing is certain,
that one pure undeniable truth.
The laughter will never stop ringing




A lightning flash,
a new life.
Its chance to carve its history across one field.
or that one moment,
That single rumble,
to cut a mighty swarthe across the land,
its tale told forever more.
Illumination,
its entity concluded.
The course of history changed.
The river of life adapted.
A new tale in a story that will last a thousand million years.




comments? :p
 
S

Summo

Guest
Why won't the baby wake up? Why? Why won't it?

:(
 
T

throdgrain

Guest
Oh god teenage angst. Morrisey dont leave us now !
 
T

Trem

Guest
Originally posted by SomeGuy
Why won't the baby wake up? Why? Why won't it?

:(
LMAO:D Awwww don't worry munk, samm will be in at 5 i'm sure she will give you some encouragement mate.
 
X

xane

Guest
Originally posted by Munkey
During english got extremley bored so I wrote a few poems:

[... intervening shit snipped ...]

comments? :p

Marilyn Manson - your throne remains unchallenged.
 
F

FunGas

Guest
Munkey - did you show this to your English tutor?

(not sure about crumps, that's about when I started laughing)
 
O

old.Explosive23

Guest
Wow, someone actually didn't get their/there/they're or your/you're mixed up.. pld :)
 
O

old.samm

Guest
Oh munk, you poor tortured soul. Come here let me make you some chicken soup, you'll begin to feel a lot better. Is this because I haven't posted for a while. I never forgot about you though.

:fluffle:
 
M

Munkey-

Guest
ooooohhhhhh. I aint depressed or anything. I just felt particularly violent during English as the guy next to me was annyoing me so I decided to use my l33t mad skillz to scare the little git.


AND THE CRUMPS IS THE SOUND OF MORTAR FALLING!!!!!!!!


and of course it aint meant to rhyme. all bad poems rhyme!
 
N

nothing

Guest
Something from the future
Came to visit me
And told me all about the world
In twenty one oh three.

"oh humans are extinct" it said,
"they killed off their own speices.
they made up an atomic bomb
and blew themselves to pieces.

"We thought this was such a waste
so we came down from Mars.
We filled the holes with silly putty
and now the world is ours!"
 
C

caLLous

Guest
Heh heh, sounds like something straight out of a Robert Rankin novel. :)
 

Users who are viewing this thread

Top Bottom