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[Rubric]

Sitting here now wondering what to write,
Wondering whether it will turn out to be shite,
Some will now doubt see it as just that,
Big brown smelly Rubric style shat.

So that’s one verse over & still no topic,
So my talent is clearly microscopic,
I hope to have something by verse three,
May get some inspiration on me way for a pee.

You know posting on this forum is a gamble,
Especially if like me you tend to ramble,
Still not sure what with this I hope to achieve,
Although some flaming may occur I believe.

So if you’ve now read as far as verse four,
You will know that this effort is poor,
You see I’m in dire need of some inspiration,
As I have subject matter constipation.

If this boredom you did survive,
Welcome to this brief verse five,
Now will you carry on,
Or have you already gone.

Maybe verse six should be much longer to read,
Although if we are truthful there is clearly no need,
I still have nothing to inspire me to continue with this,
I’d strongly advise you to give the next verse a miss.

The problem with writing when you have no subjects,
Discounting the projected large number of rejects,
Is the big problem that drives you round the bend,
The coming up with a suitable & fitting end.

 

[Rubric]

Wrote some poetry,
Was extremely bad effort,
Now trying Haiku.

 

[old.LandShark]

I liked you better before you sold out.

 

[mirieth]

I never liked you at all .

 

[Rubric]

The flaming is bad,
Try to be more forgiving,
Then the love will flow.

 

[mirieth]

As bad as your haiku? ;\

 

[Munkey-]

There was a young boy called rubric
who thought he could rhyme

but for shit he cant.

(I'm entering this into the nobel peace prize for literature)

 

[Sharma]

I honestly cannot come to grips with Haiku

 

[Belsameth]

Haiku's 4tehwin imo

 

[mirieth]

Only if they're good Haikus .

 

[Munkey-]

Famine in Uganda
Send spam

 

[mirieth]

Your wish is my command.