comic

[Jack_The_Dorf]

save me makin a new post and annoying everyone
I decided to just update this one

two comic strips up now
http://uk.geocities.com/kortexuk/cartone.html

http://uk.geocities.com/kortexuk/carttwo.htm

 

[Teh Fonz!!1]

hehe how cool are they!!

Damn cool, that's how....

 

[Oldbone O]

sweet, are you going to draw them in balck&white only?

 

[Teh Fonz!!1]

I really hate people who kick ass at art, that cartoon rocks mate.

Teach..

 

[Garaen]

Very nice mate

 

[Dook_Pug]

They seriously rock!

You do realise that you'll have to keep us al updated on your progress with them now, right?

 

[Solid]

Dwarf looks well cool

 

[Jack_The_Dorf]

ty

glad you like them

i'm not sure if I should colour them in or not
I'll give it a go but im not too keen on it

 

[Generic Poster]

hmm, presumably you want some feedback.

Dwarf/kobold get the thumbs up!
Troll looks to simple in comparison


btw- why are you uploading in .swf format?


[edit] I see the problem with the troll now, he looks out of shape!
Maybe some muscle defination, broader shoulders... etc, needs to be more brutal looking!

Just my 2c

 

[old.tRoG]

lol at the kobbie

good work, they're excellent!

 

[old.LandShark]

Page not available.... :|
Get a decent host OMG!!
Haven't seen it yet but I'll assume it's good =P

 

[Jack_The_Dorf]

i guess it was a bit lazy of me to keep it as an swf
I'm drawing them in flash as its the only thing I have other than paint!!

I'll put a JPG up now so it doesnt resize and stretch them.

 

[Pixie.Pebr]

Awesome pictahrs!

Drop me a line when you got a few strips ready to publicise, I'll host it for you on fluxe.net if you don't have a host already
(Geocities aer the s00k!!1 )

 

[Kagato.]

Very nice

 

[Generic Poster]

Originally posted by old.LandShark
Page not available.... :|
Get a decent host OMG!!
Haven't seen it yet but I'll assume it's good =P

Originally posted by Jack_The_Dorf
i'm sure you all know this but as it's on geocities you may need to copy the link and paste it into the address bar

 

[Exinferis]

and you think geocities is a good host because of that?

 

[Tilda]

Very good, the Troll does need to be more "squarish" though, ie.
square shoulders more square heads.

Tilda

 

[Uncle Sick(tm)]

Draw a Luri! I command you!

 

[old.TeaSpoon]

They rock!

I, like Teh Fonz, hate people who can draw!!
I agree about the Troll tho, need a little muscle detail.

But very, very cool

 

[Jonaldo]

I thought that was a luri, not a kobi... mids don't wear robes I think.

 

[Jack_The_Dorf]

tis a luri

heres something i've been messin with for a bit

http://uk.geocities.com/kortexuk/cartone.html

 

[Jonaldo]

looks good

 

[Reverant Mezz]

nice work m8, but make the dorf evullll >=]