Acietha...a haiku for you

[gustav]

Swift and beautiful
your music plays
for ears more worthy than mine


Sorry Shaeffer, shes definately the queen of Forest Sauvage...we are just her jesters. Was good to see you both last night.

 

[old.Purificator]

awwwww :wub:

 

[vestax]

 

[maxgirth]

Originally posted by gustav
Swift and beautiful
your music plays
for ears more worthy than mine


Sorry Shaeffer, shes definately the queen of Forest Sauvage...we are just her jesters. Was good to see you both last night.

It was good to see you at HW yesterday to bud, Minimax btw.

 

[Serbitar]

sorry to be picky but...

Arent haiku's meant to be:

first line - 5 syllables
second line - 7 syllables
third line - 5 syllables

<English Lang GCSE - C, English Lit GCSE - Kicked out after first year>

 

[old.GeForce]

feel the wub! \o/

 

[gustav]

Tehy can be 5-7-5 but its up the writer...they fairly free flowing

 

[Flesh]

You were annoying me with your emote spam you little bastard ;o
I told her you were dead as soon as you unstealthed, but she whined..lucky git :<

 

[gustav]

hehe perhaps next time Flesh we have a fight. Of course as I'm so uber I'm sure its gonna be onesided, but hey...maybe you might get very very lucky and beat a hunter



nerf pally blocking machines

 

[Graknak]

Poetry has no rules, it's the feeling that matters

 

[Rubric]

Haikus must have rules,
or they are post pharming mules,
You just need the tools.

 

[Rubric]

Incorrect Haiku,
Smellls distinctly like old poo.
Try harder or shoo.

 

[Graknak]

Let's make a Haiku.
One that does better then you.
That's what i shall do.

Oops what did i do.
I made a better haiku.
So no pie for you.

With my 1337 voodoo,
not the voodoo that you do
I beat your Haiku.

Pffft, all too easy

 

[old.Tyraette]

haiku's shouldnt rhyme btw

 

[Graknak]

Ofcourse a Haiku,
should rhyme if it is fitting
Hmm like this makes sense

Sing along this song
With me all day and night long
D'oh it's a Haiku

Fallen for Haiku's
my journey to perfection
is still a long way

An inspired mind
might hold some wonderfull things
yet may lack the skill

 

[Rubric]

Originally posted by old.Tyraette
haiku's shouldnt rhyme btw

They can rhyme you know,
Its good if its done for show,
Tis difficult though.

Ones that dont are easy,
I bet even you could do one,
Give it a try mate.