twisted prophecy

[j00ster]

Hey , ive been working on a song and got some lyrics together, thought id post it and see what u guys think ,or if anything needs improving.

Im not entirely sure of the name and perhaps certain parts could be improved but they

Twisted Prophecy

The day was gone and soon entered night
a once content land filled with woeful plight
the time of men will soon run thin
As the twisted prophecy begins

You can take my life but not my soul
As the truth behind the fate of men unfolds
With conviction i trust in my blade
to send this evil back from whence it came

The the dark priest whispers in my ear
"join with us my son and there is nothing to fear"
"Never! Your words are but poison to thee
Your sins will now be for god to take heed"

You can take my life but not my soul
As the truth behind the fate of men unfolds
With conviction i trust in my blade
to send this evil back from whence it came

From the infernal monastary the demons led
to seek the blood of the innocent to shed
But the templars stand with might and valour
to fight the prophecy in our darkest hour

You can take my life but not my soul
As the truth behind the fate of men unfolds
With conviction i trust in my blade
to send this evil back from whence it came

[Bluesky]

It feels quit Hammerfall-esque and i like it