I sat down and started writing, after looking into the tips i got from you all.
Remember i cant take in everybodys names in the story at once,
i will take in whoever i choose, but if ppl think this was fun, i will write a followup and maybe more.
I RESERVE MYSELF FROM SPELLING ERRORS.
cba installing word and i'm not perfect

Thankful for any advices / oppinions, even the bad ones.
Enjoy your reading.
Remember, this is just the beginning. (and yes i am a noob writer

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Saga of Daoc excal part one.